Go to the very bottom of the thread and read your way upwards.

In our story we have:

King of the Pops -      A chocolate colored thoroughbred horse

Jamie -                         The strapper who is 23 yrs old

Bob Worthington  -  The trainer

Jenny-Lou  -                Jamie's little sister and the main protagonist in the story.

Delia Smuggleton -     The evil and wicked trainer of a Cup hopeful Majestic Red

 

You may add other minor characters if you need.

 

Try to include lots of descriptive adjectives and adverbs. Use similes and metaphors to help paint us a picture so we can see what's going on as well.